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Well done Sammy, its a real good 100wc! I like some of the speech verbs like 'bellowed'
This shows a really clear viewpoint Sammy, and I like the way you express the sadness of "It had gone forever."
Hi Sammy great 100WC like Isacc Your speech is very good, I didn't really get the ending but it still was great. Charlotte
Hi Sammy, Great 100wc! I like all the words that you used instead of said! Great Job! :-)
What a great adventure story Sammy, and I could sense how hard you tried to save the eggs.
What a great adventure story Sammy for the 100WC. I could sense how hard you were trying to save the eggs.
Hi Sammy - What a great adventure story for the 100WC. I could really sense how hard you were trying to save the eggs.
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