Amazing work Samantha! I love the fact that you have made the day before easter a very bad one! I also love the fact that you froze all the chocolate rabbits before they all melted! Great Work!
Well done Samantha. I like the idea of collecting all the chocolate rabbits so that they did not melt in the sun. What a great idea to handwrite this and then scan it in, it adds a personal touch. You have several words with the letter 'e' missing off the end (before, chocolate), see if you can add them in.
I love the idea of collecting all the chocolate rabbits before they melt Samantha. You have several words which need an 'e' on the end of them (before, chocolate), see if you can add them in. A handwritten entry is a lovely idea, it gives it a personal touch.
Great work Samantha, I love the sentence where you store all the chocolate rabbits in the freezer. EXCELLENT!
ReplyDeletemabye to improve it you could check some spellings before writing it?
Other than that a real fab 100wc!
This was an excellent solution to a problem. I wish I had chocolate rabbits that just appeared everywhere and needed collecting!
ReplyDeleteAmazing work Samantha! I love the fact that you have made the day before easter a very bad one! I also love the fact that you froze all the chocolate rabbits before they all melted! Great Work!
ReplyDeleteWell done Samantha. I like the idea of collecting all the chocolate rabbits so that they did not melt in the sun. What a great idea to handwrite this and then scan it in, it adds a personal touch. You have several words with the letter 'e' missing off the end (before, chocolate), see if you can add them in.
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Clare Powell (Team 100WC)
I love the idea of collecting all the chocolate rabbits before they melt Samantha. You have several words which need an 'e' on the end of them (before, chocolate), see if you can add them in. A handwritten entry is a lovely idea, it gives it a personal touch.
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Clare Powell (Team 100WC)
Very good Samantha.
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