Thursday, 8 March 2012

Molly's 100wc - week 23


Today we went to Sandy Cove beach, on the weather forcast it predicticed it would be the warmest day of the year. But it was so, so wrong. We drove down the winding lanes of Sandy Cove. Finally after hours of driving we reached the sandy beach. We all stepped out of the sea blue car, our toes burning on the baking sand. I ran out to the sea and started to paddle in the warm water. My  mother set out the scrummy picnic for us all to eat. Suddenly the weather changed for the worst - oh no! I forgot it was a dreaded  leap year... 




By Molly - Ash Class.
Posted by at 17:01
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21 comments:

  1. isaac the parrot8 March 2012 at 17:31

    I love your story Mols, did you copy my idea on leap year?

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    1. Molly Rowley8 March 2012 at 19:43

      No... I jst thought it would be nice to link it back to the past 100wc prompts! Oh and thanks Isaac-attack!

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  2. chloe8 March 2012 at 18:19

    that is a really good 100wc molly well done

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  3. Han9 March 2012 at 23:58

    Hi Molly!

    It's Me Hannah again! Good effort on another story!!

    Going to the seaside while I'm on holiday is one of my favourite things to do! When I was in Cornwall in September we went to the seaside and my husband Chris wouldn't come paddling with me so I rolled up my jeans and went anyway!

    I commented on your Week 22 story about the describing words that you used - and you use them again. You describe the colour of the car so well that I feel like i'm there with you at the sea side.

    Well done Molly! I'll be sure to check in for Week 24 :)

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    1. Molly Rowley10 March 2012 at 10:39

      Hi Hannah!

      Thanks for all the great comments! I'm glad you liked my 100wc again! Have you done any 100wcs yet, if you have I will comment on yours!

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  4. AMBER10 March 2012 at 22:24

    WELL DOWN MOLLY YOUR 100WC IS REALLY GOOD I LIKE IT

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    1. Moo-cow Molly11 March 2012 at 10:33

      Thanks Amber, I'm glad you like it. But the only thing thats wrong with your comment is you spelt 'well done' wrong, you wrote 'well down' instead of 'well done'

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  5. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 15:12

    hi moll heres my story for your compatition :-D

    Spy life
    "Hurry up"amy cried to her bestfriend molly. You would think that the two girls were normal children but you are wrong! Ammy and Molly are secret spys saving the earth behind the whole worlds back....hang on the world doesnt have a back.....sorry back to the story one lovley somers morning when Amy and molly were at school there ruler comunicaters started bleaping madly wich only meant trouble.......sooo SKULL THE EVIL VILLAN WAS BACK!!!Amy acted quikly she rased her hand and lied that her and Molly had a 'save the pandas' protest, and as the teacher loved animals she gave in to the girls. Amy and molly jumped up and zoomed into the store cuboured .As molly pulled the leaver to take them to base amy asked molly:"we better get some gagets otherwise we'll be doomed in the midsts of skull"...

    ...when Amy and mollly are spys there quite differant: Amys usally a shy tomboy with a love of sports when shes a spy shes a butkicking karate master still with a love of sports. shes also NOT NOT ATALL shy she's loud.Mollys a caring mad person and a great friend to Amy. When she's a spy shes tough and a expert on gagets and computers.a few hours later AMY and MOLLY were in a furious battle Amy was kicking and punching ,meanwhile next to her molly was firing a lazer could the win.......
    from Amy hope u like it moll

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    1. Moo-cow Molly11 March 2012 at 15:53

      Hi Amy,

      I really like this, but the only thing is: There is no capital letters and full stops in some places. You spelt my name wrong a few times, but when I edit it I will change all of that!

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    2. isaac the hedgehog14 March 2012 at 16:46

      STOP giving people names Molly! Chlo Chlo, Isaac-attack (thanks!), Moo-cow Molly (LOL!) I don't know! Big FAT LOL!

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    3. Molly Rowley14 March 2012 at 20:44

      No, I like giving people names!!!

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  6. isaac the hedgehog14 March 2012 at 16:43

    Did you get the idea from MI High?

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  7. Anonymous14 March 2012 at 17:52

    I really liked your story. It is not like any other story that I have read today. Keep up to good work!

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  8. Nolan(St. John Vianney)14 March 2012 at 18:23

    Good job,bro, I thought your 100wc for this week was really legit,bro. This may be one of the best 100wc`s I have ever seen.

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    1. isaac the Parrot15 March 2012 at 16:42

      She's a girl and not your brother, LOL! bro!

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    2. Molly Rowley16 March 2012 at 19:21

      Its not the best you've ever seen I can tell you that! Oh yeah and I am not a bro!

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  9. Anonymous14 March 2012 at 19:01

    Wow! That was really good. Great Job!

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  10. Jessamy11 April 2012 at 19:48

    This is a new amzing peace of work!!! Maby you could wrte a new thing? Jessamy :)

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