It was an lovely summer day in Old, a small village. In Old I smelt the lovely flowers. I heard the stream rushing throw Old. I can see the one swan in the mane river. I felt the wind touching my tongue.
What a super idea to make your sentences about your senses! I really enjoyed reading them and imagining I was visiting Old. That is a very unusual name for a village! Thank you Sam!
Samuel, I loved the nature in your post. Do you love nature too? If you do, why do you? The senses you used really made a big connection with using senses with nature. I'm a nature lover you know. :D
I really felt the nature of the village when I read your post. Do you like the nature there? If you do, then why do you. Do you know that I am a nature lover and even my teacher is a nature person too.
Samuel, if you are a peace lover you should check out our ABC Peacebook on our website! I'll give you the link. http://sites.google.com/a/sd36.bc.ca/msdosanjh/abc-peacebook
Samuel,If you love nature so much be sure to check out Esha's blog post about nature. Here's the link: http://kidblog.org/MsDosanjhsClass/Esha344139/ask-nature-before-you-take-it/
Cool work Sam, a few spelling mistakes here and there; but still a fabulous piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a super idea to make your sentences about your senses! I really enjoyed reading them and imagining I was visiting Old. That is a very unusual name for a village! Thank you Sam!
ReplyDeleteSamuel, I loved the nature in your post. Do you love nature too? If you do, why do you? The senses you used really made a big connection with using senses with nature. I'm a nature lover you know. :D
ReplyDeleteHow did the air go on your tongue?
ReplyDeleteI really felt the nature of the village when I read your post. Do you like the nature there? If you do, then why do you. Do you know that I am a nature lover and even my teacher is a nature person too.
ReplyDeleteSamuel, if you are a peace lover you should check out our ABC Peacebook on our website! I'll give you the link. http://sites.google.com/a/sd36.bc.ca/msdosanjh/abc-peacebook
ReplyDeleteEven I felt sooooooooooo much nature in this post, Ansh! Ansh, did you notice the senses used in this post? The senses connected to nature!
ReplyDeleteSamuel,If you love nature so much be sure to check out Esha's blog post about nature. Here's the link: http://kidblog.org/MsDosanjhsClass/Esha344139/ask-nature-before-you-take-it/
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