Saturday, 17 March 2012

Molly's 100wc - week 24.

There I was walking down the filthy side streets of Rhyl. I was carefully watching my feet to make sure I didn't tred on anything. But then suddenly I heard a strange noise, it was very quiet. Then I heard it again and again, it seemed to get louder and louder. It seemed to be coming to me. I quickly backed up to a brick wall, it was a dead end. I pushed myself back up to the wall. Suddenly a huge white spider crashed down to the floor right infront of me. I saw fifty small spiders climb around me. This was the end...

By Molly - Ash Class.
Posted by at 16:53
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9 comments:

  1. Ash18 March 2012 at 09:43

    Well Molly, you've put me off ever wanting to visit Rhyl!!! I wonder if it's really like this?

    This is a super 100wc that I really enjoyed reading. You expertly used your 100 words to create real tension and fear for the reader - well done!

    Mr K :-)

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    1. Sick Molly :-(18 March 2012 at 12:47

      Thanks Mr K, at the moment i'm really ill! I've been feeling sick, head aches.....

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    2. Ash18 March 2012 at 12:48

      Oh dear, Mol - sounds like you have the bug I've got! :-/

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    3. Molly Rowley18 March 2012 at 13:27

      Hope you get better soon Mr K... And I hope I get better soon too!

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  2. Mrs Robinson (100WC Team)19 March 2012 at 07:16

    Hi Molly
    Really enjoyed reading your 100WC this week. You have obviously given the words some thought and come up with a tense piece of writing. I thought your opening sentence really hooks the reader - well done,

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    1. Molly (The one who still feels a bit ill =(19 March 2012 at 18:38

      Hi Mrs Robinson!

      I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my 100wc this week! It is quite a tense piece of writing, well I think that the same as you! And does the first sentence really hook you? I didn't think it would hook anyone!

      Thanks for commenting!

      Molly x

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  3. chloe20 March 2012 at 16:31

    WOW this is an amazing 100 word challenge. It made me want to read on.
    But my favourite part was at the end when you said this was the end....
    Well Done

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    1. Molly, (Who is on her netbook RIGHT- NOW!)20 March 2012 at 18:07

      Thanks Chlo Chlo! I really enjoyed
      reading your 100wc too, you know! I like the ending too! 'This was the end...'

      Thanks for commenting Chloe!

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  4. Jessamy11 April 2012 at 19:45

    END of what??? PLEASE carry this on or make it into a story!!! You are a roal moddle. I would love to write like you!!!
    Jessamy

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