One day I was jogging down the street when I saw a shop called ‘Buzy Books’ I walked in, it was complete darkness. I heard a noise, “Hello!” I shouted - there was no reply, so I walked further down the aisle. Suddenly a man in scruffy clothes walked in front of me, he asked, “How may I help you?” in a really weak voice.
“Don’t you mean how can I help you?” I asked “How long have you been in this shop?”
“Thirty-nine years,” he said with his voice fading away. Then I realised he had died…
By Matthew - Ash Class.
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DeleteI really liked this Matt, you keep the reader in suspense, very eerie and cleverly written.
ReplyDeleteAt last Matty your 100wc. Was worth the wait. Well done. Mumx
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ReplyDeleteHello Matt! This is a super piece for the 100WC. I'm really impressed with the way you planned it so that it made sense. It had a very sad ending though. I wonder why no-one had seen the man before? Well done & thank you for sharing your work on the 100WC!
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