Monday 12 March 2012

Amber's 5 sentence challenge - week 3

In the garden I have lots of beautiful flowers. In the garden I play with my friends. In the garden the mud is made out of milk chocolate. In the garden I have toys made of sweet jelly beans. That’s what’s in my garden. By Amber - Ash Class.
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3 comments:

  1. Moo-cow Molly12 March 2012 at 17:10

    Wow Amber- those sentences are really good. Keep it up! xx :¬)

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  2. elise13 March 2012 at 09:50

    i dont know what to say thats amazing from elise in chestnut class

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  3. isaac the Parrot15 March 2012 at 16:39

    MOO to you Molly! Great sentences Amber, I love them :) One think though, if you are aloud to use commas, mabye next time try to use a few! LOL!

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