Emily that was a very intresting 100wc! I like the sentence where you 'sprinted' to your Mum & Dads room to wake them up. You should be really proud of yourself!
Wow Emily- Thats a very fantastic 100wc! I like the start of the piece of writing, ' I'm very exited about easter!' I love that bit! Keep up the great writing!
Wow! You really loved Easter in this story. I also LOVE easter. It's sooooooooo much fun. What a 100wc challenge story to write. Can I share this story with some of my friends?
Emily that was a very intresting 100wc! I like the sentence where you 'sprinted' to your Mum & Dads room to wake them up. You should be really proud of yourself!
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting Emily! You have some excellent word choices.
ReplyDeleteWow Emily- Thats a very fantastic 100wc! I like the start of the piece of writing, ' I'm very exited about easter!' I love that bit! Keep up the great writing!
ReplyDeleteLovely 100WC Emily, you have picked some fantastic words to use which definitely improve your piece of writing. Good work!
ReplyDeleteWell Done :)
Hello Emily,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story! You chose some powerful vocabulary which made your story interesting to read.
I look forward to reading the next one!
Mr Malcolm
Team 100WC
Awesome 100WC Emily!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your blog post a lot. :D
Wow! You really loved Easter in this story. I also LOVE easter. It's sooooooooo much fun. What a 100wc challenge story to write. Can I share this story with some of my friends?
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