Thursday 29 March 2012

Kirsty's 100wc - week 26.

I quickly ran to Easter Farm to see the baby rabbits hopping in the shed. Suddenly the beautiful blue sky changed to a muddy brown colour. It started to rain! Not just any rain but big, giant chocolate buttons. I leapt for cover as quick as a flash! From my hiding place I could hear gigantic cracks as the chocolate rocks hit the ground, I felt scared.
After a while, I walked out slowly. I couldn’t believe my eyes as I saw the hopping rabbits changed to chocolate rabbits!!
As the sky turned blue again I watched as the chocolate rabbits melted in the sun....

By Kirsty, supported by Mrs Robinson.
Posted by at 18:42
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6 comments:

  1. Ash29 March 2012 at 18:44

    Wow, Kirsty! This is a fantastic 100wc! I love some of the words you have used, like 'suddenly', 'as quick as a flash' and 'gigantic'.
    Keep up the good work!
    Mr K :-)

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  2. Isaac the Badger29 March 2012 at 19:06

    Mr K is right, you took the words that i was going to say!

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  3. Anonymous31 March 2012 at 10:54

    This is lovely Kirsty. Not only is it a brilliant idea, but you have used some lovely words to bring the scene to life. Well done.

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  4. Molly2 April 2012 at 10:26

    Amazing Kirsty! I love the fact that instead of rain there is chocolate buttons instead,and then they turned into Chocolate Easter Bunnies as well! I love it!

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  5. Dr. Lisa (Team 100WC)4 April 2012 at 23:10

    Kirsty,

    This is great. So imaginative. I love the idea of chocolate rain drops, but chocolate buttons sounds a little scary. Super job on this challenge.

    Dr. Lisa (Team 100WC)

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  6. Jessica24 June 2012 at 01:40

    Wow! What creativity you have Kirsty. This is the best story I've seen from you. Keep up the awesome work!

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