Thursday, 29 March 2012

Kirsty's 100wc - week 26.

I quickly ran to Easter Farm to see the baby rabbits hopping in the shed. Suddenly the beautiful blue sky changed to a muddy brown colour. It started to rain! Not just any rain but big, giant chocolate buttons. I leapt for cover as quick as a flash! From my hiding place I could hear gigantic cracks as the chocolate rocks hit the ground, I felt scared.
After a while, I walked out slowly. I couldn’t believe my eyes as I saw the hopping rabbits changed to chocolate rabbits!!
As the sky turned blue again I watched as the chocolate rabbits melted in the sun....

By Kirsty, supported by Mrs Robinson.


  1. Wow, Kirsty! This is a fantastic 100wc! I love some of the words you have used, like 'suddenly', 'as quick as a flash' and 'gigantic'.
    Keep up the good work!
    Mr K :-)

  2. Isaac the Badger29 March 2012 at 19:06

    Mr K is right, you took the words that i was going to say!

  3. This is lovely Kirsty. Not only is it a brilliant idea, but you have used some lovely words to bring the scene to life. Well done.

  4. Amazing Kirsty! I love the fact that instead of rain there is chocolate buttons instead,and then they turned into Chocolate Easter Bunnies as well! I love it!

  5. Kirsty,

    This is great. So imaginative. I love the idea of chocolate rain drops, but chocolate buttons sounds a little scary. Super job on this challenge.

    Dr. Lisa (Team 100WC)

  6. Wow! What creativity you have Kirsty. This is the best story I've seen from you. Keep up the awesome work!


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