Thursday 8 March 2012

Ethan's 100wc - week 23.


 Everyone was inside. The worst experience ever, we all say. This had all started on a bright summers day, a week ago. The weather forecast said, “ We have predicted high storms everywhere, meteor showers and tornadoes. Stay underground everyone!” That scared us all. But it was worse. Blizzards, tsunamis, everything horrible.
Many didn’t make it. The world was covered in bloodshed. This had all happened on the day of my birth, the 29th of February. I was going to have a party, but my friends got killed. It was true. The weather had surely changed for the worst. Never to be continued………

By Ethan - Ash Class.
Posted by at 19:56
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13 comments:

  1. CoolJackB4449 March 2012 at 12:01

    Wow! Good 100wc! Its actually quite scary!!!!

    Jack B
    Maple Class Greenfields

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  2. Acer Class9 March 2012 at 13:48

    Goodness me, I wonder if anyone will write a happy ending?

    Well done.

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  3. liam9 March 2012 at 16:07

    that was AMAZING Ethan well done that is so good!!!!!

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    1. ethan9 March 2012 at 20:55

      thanks for the comments everyone!

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  4. Diethild Starkmeth Team 10012 March 2012 at 16:55

    A fantastically scary and dramatic story, Ethan. You told it really well!
    I would like to ask you if a tsunami is an event related to weather.
    Could you explain this, please?
    Great job, Ethan!
    Kind regards,
    Diethild

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  5. Mrs Halford (Team 100WC)13 March 2012 at 12:33

    Hello Ethan. Wow, what an explosive and scary 100wc entry! The weather certainly did take a turn for the worse...in fact I can't imagine it getting any worse than your description!
    Well done for writing such an eventful and frightening post. I had to check this out as my class are also called Ash class :) Keep on blogging.

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  6. Jake (St. John Vianney)14 March 2012 at 18:17

    Scary...

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  7. Anonymous14 March 2012 at 18:59

    Wow, that totally gave me shivers.


    Kennedy C. (At. John Vianney)

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  8. Emily Saint John Vianney14 March 2012 at 19:05

    Wow your writing really grabbed my attention. Have you ever thought about writing a novel? I hope you do.

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  9. Emily Saint John Vianney14 March 2012 at 19:05

    Wow your writing is great!

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  10. Emily Saint John Vianney14 March 2012 at 19:06

    Wow your writing is great!

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  11. Anonymous15 May 2012 at 05:18

    Nice 1 Ethan

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  12. Esha18 May 2012 at 02:38

    You did a great job Ethan I love your post's

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