Thursday, 8 March 2012
Ethan's 100wc - week 23.
Everyone was inside. The worst experience ever, we all say. This had all started on a bright summers day, a week ago. The weather forecast said, “ We have predicted high storms everywhere, meteor showers and tornadoes. Stay underground everyone!” That scared us all. But it was worse. Blizzards, tsunamis, everything horrible.
Many didn’t make it. The world was covered in bloodshed. This had all happened on the day of my birth, the 29th of February. I was going to have a party, but my friends got killed. It was true. The weather had surely changed for the worst. Never to be continued………
By Ethan - Ash Class.
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Wow! Good 100wc! Its actually quite scary!!!!
ReplyDeleteJack B
Maple Class Greenfields
Goodness me, I wonder if anyone will write a happy ending?
ReplyDeleteWell done.
that was AMAZING Ethan well done that is so good!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comments everyone!
DeleteA fantastically scary and dramatic story, Ethan. You told it really well!
ReplyDeleteI would like to ask you if a tsunami is an event related to weather.
Could you explain this, please?
Great job, Ethan!
Kind regards,
Diethild
Hello Ethan. Wow, what an explosive and scary 100wc entry! The weather certainly did take a turn for the worse...in fact I can't imagine it getting any worse than your description!
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing such an eventful and frightening post. I had to check this out as my class are also called Ash class :) Keep on blogging.
Scary...
ReplyDeleteWow, that totally gave me shivers.
ReplyDeleteKennedy C. (At. John Vianney)
Wow your writing really grabbed my attention. Have you ever thought about writing a novel? I hope you do.
ReplyDeleteWow your writing is great!
ReplyDeleteWow your writing is great!
ReplyDeleteNice 1 Ethan
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job Ethan I love your post's
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