Sunday, 4 March 2012

Callum's 100wc - Week 22


I saw a colossal ball of bones! I was panicking and terrified, what should I do? I started running! The bones were huge; it was bizarre to see lots of bones stuck together. “Mind out Jack! “ I bellowed, Jack looked, but it was too late...

It seemed to have two gloomy eyes, one runny nose and one miserable mouth. I kind of felt sorry for the dismal sphere. Was it a friend or foe?

I didn’t wait to find out; I darted to the safety of my house! I knocked relentlessly till the door swung open. “Help Mum!” I howled.........

By Callum  - Ash Class.

4 comments:

  1. WOW - brilliant story, Callum!
    Mr K :-)

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  2. hi mate
    brill story cant stop reading

    see ya lewis

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  3. Hi Callum,

    Great piece! I love the question-is it friend or foe? I enjoyed this a lot.

    Well done.
    4amWriter/Team 100WC

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  4. Isaac the Badger6 March 2012 at 17:23

    Cool STORY cai! A-MAZ-ING! LOL! LOL!

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