Friday, 23 March 2012

Lucy's 5 sentence challenge!

One fine morning, I felt so ill that I didn’t go out. I opened the window and saw a lovely scene. I had never seen this before. Something moved rapidly – what was it? It must be the ducks flapping their wings!

By Lucy (with some help from Mr K)


  1. Super sentences Lucy! Well done!

  2. I don't know how much help you got from Mr.K Lucy but you have written some super sentences here. You used your imagination to tell the story beyond the picture. Very well done & thank you Mr. K!

    1. Lucy's words - I just helped get them down on the page! Great work, Lucy :-)


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