Thursday, 26 April 2012

Jack M's 100wc - week 28:

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  1. Good work Jack punctuation.

  2. Adrian and Jacob2227 April 2012 at 15:03

    Hello Jack We like your 100wc Is very creative and we think you can add description and connectives

  3. Hello Jack!
    This is such a good story & I know the Night Zoo Keeper will like it! You have given your readers a great description of the animal and also told us about it. I like the way you have thought of how to help especially as it didn't like the zoo. Thank you for joining the 100WC. Hope to see you again!

  4. Hi Jack! I loved your 100WC story, and I liked how you helped the animal find a nice place to live. I also liked how the beginning of your story sounded like a rhyme, very clever!

  5. elise (chestnut)3 June 2012 at 09:57

    hi jack that was a really good 100wc it was very describtive and had lots of punctuation. you described the animal really really well. well done.

    from elise in chestnut


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