Hello Jack! This is such a good story & I know the Night Zoo Keeper will like it! You have given your readers a great description of the animal and also told us about it. I like the way you have thought of how to help especially as it didn't like the zoo. Thank you for joining the 100WC. Hope to see you again!
Hi Jack! I loved your 100WC story, and I liked how you helped the animal find a nice place to live. I also liked how the beginning of your story sounded like a rhyme, very clever!
Good work Jack Morris.
ReplyDeleteGood work Jack punctuation.
ReplyDeleteHello Jack We like your 100wc Is very creative and we think you can add description and connectives
ReplyDeleteHello Jack!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a good story & I know the Night Zoo Keeper will like it! You have given your readers a great description of the animal and also told us about it. I like the way you have thought of how to help especially as it didn't like the zoo. Thank you for joining the 100WC. Hope to see you again!
Hi Jack! I loved your 100WC story, and I liked how you helped the animal find a nice place to live. I also liked how the beginning of your story sounded like a rhyme, very clever!
ReplyDeletehi jack that was a really good 100wc it was very describtive and had lots of punctuation. you described the animal really really well. well done.
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