tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post207950199921175014..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Jack M's 100wc - week 28:Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-23242895223800616242012-06-03T09:57:39.992+01:002012-06-03T09:57:39.992+01:00hi jack that was a really good 100wc it was very d...hi jack that was a really good 100wc it was very describtive and had lots of punctuation. you described the animal really really well. well done. <br /><br /><br /><br />from elise in chestnutelise (chestnut)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-75009844512595474402012-04-28T19:53:40.639+01:002012-04-28T19:53:40.639+01:00Hi Jack! I loved your 100WC story, and I liked how...Hi Jack! I loved your 100WC story, and I liked how you helped the animal find a nice place to live. I also liked how the beginning of your story sounded like a rhyme, very clever!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-66191410622944494532012-04-28T09:17:52.992+01:002012-04-28T09:17:52.992+01:00Hello Jack!
This is such a good story & I know...Hello Jack!<br />This is such a good story & I know the Night Zoo Keeper will like it! You have given your readers a great description of the animal and also told us about it. I like the way you have thought of how to help especially as it didn't like the zoo. Thank you for joining the 100WC. Hope to see you again!Mrs Skinnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-2183591348653013542012-04-27T15:03:11.438+01:002012-04-27T15:03:11.438+01:00Hello Jack We like your 100wc Is very creative and...Hello Jack We like your 100wc Is very creative and we think you can add description and connectivesAdrian and Jacob22noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-87981348564474652422012-04-27T14:19:25.684+01:002012-04-27T14:19:25.684+01:00Good work Jack punctuation.Good work Jack punctuation.Harryhttp://www.ash.greenfields.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-30253509570899225992012-04-27T14:19:18.904+01:002012-04-27T14:19:18.904+01:00Good work Jack Morris.Good work Jack Morris.Klaudiushttp://www.ash.greenfelds.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com