Sunday, 1 April 2012

Isaac's 100wc - week 26.

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6 comments:

  1. Wow Isaac- Thats a really good piece of writing! The only thing that I would suggest to make it a bit better is to add more descriptive word in there! I mean mybe put some descibing words about the room that you were in; what it was like to be in there...ect... But its still an a amazing piece of writing Isaac! Well Done! :-)

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    1. Cool, REMEMBER! I only had 100 words!

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  2. hi isaac your work is good but im saying the same of molly said that you need to inprvit ok :):)

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  3. Hi Isaac,

    Nice job with the piece. I liked the twist at the end, I am afraid of what will happen!

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  4. hi issac yesday i whent to both and i came back to day and im missing you all and so i don't need to miss you all now becaus im seeing you tomrro and i hope you had a nice hollday bye lol :)

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