That's absolutely brilliant! The only thing I'd do is turn down the music or speak up. I really like your idea to mix an animal and an object unlike most people (including me!) I love your description of his smell and sound a lot. I wish I had an Elekite!
Hello Ceri, I think you could maybe turn down the music but I do like the way you have done the description of the smell but I LOVED it so much well done I really want more of your voice or talk a bit louder well done
Wow Ceri. Your use of description is amazing I really like your 100wc. :¬)
ReplyDeleteThat's absolutely brilliant! The only thing I'd do is turn down the music or speak up. I really like your idea to mix an animal and an object unlike most people (including me!) I love your description of his smell and sound a lot. I wish I had an Elekite!
ReplyDeleteHello Ceri,
ReplyDeleteI think you could maybe turn down the music but I do like the way you have done the description of the smell but I LOVED it so much well done I really want more of your voice or talk a bit louder well done
Your voice is very sweet.
ReplyDelete-Esha :D