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WOW! this piece is brilliant. You used lots of discriptive words. Perhaps you could have put more wow words because there could have been a good sparkle. It would have made this piece spectacular. Well done!From Joseph ( High Lawn )
Well done Charlotte, this piece uses lots of descriptive words to descibe you animal. I really love the way that you have created your animal to be very differnt than all the others that I have read, especilly that it has NO brain! That is very differnt! Keep it up!
Well done, Charlotte, you've created a vivid and imaginative piece, with engaging details. Remember that words that don't start with a consonant need "an" before them: "an apple", "an elephant", "an itch", "an ostrich", "an uncle".
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