Thursday, 26 April 2012

Charlotte's 100wc - week 28:

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  1. WOW! this piece is brilliant. You used lots of discriptive words. Perhaps you could have put more wow words because there could have been a good sparkle. It would have made this piece spectacular. Well done!
    From Joseph ( High Lawn )

  2. Well done Charlotte, this piece uses lots of descriptive words to descibe you animal. I really love the way that you have created your animal to be very differnt than all the others that I have read, especilly that it has NO brain! That is very differnt! Keep it up!

  3. Well done, Charlotte, you've created a vivid and imaginative piece, with engaging details. Remember that words that don't start with a consonant need "an" before them: "an apple", "an elephant", "an itch", "an ostrich", "an uncle".


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