Wahh,wahh- That a bit sad, :-(. I can't belive that most of the chocolate rabbits melted! And what was so special about the first chocolate that melted? I think that you have used this weeks prompt very well!
How sad for the chocolate rabbits to lose one of their friends to the sun but to lose the entire community in a ceremonial parade honouring the loss is a tragedy. It seems they hadn't learned from the loss of their friend.
This is a well written and creative piece, Mya. I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you keep entering the 100WC. In your "reactions" choices above, I had to select "cool". :)
Wahh,wahh- That a bit sad, :-(. I can't belive that most of the chocolate rabbits melted! And what was so special about the first chocolate that melted? I think that you have used this weeks prompt very well!
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't like to be a chocolate rabbit! My word, how did you fit such an epic piece of writing into 100 words? Its incredible
ReplyDeleteQuite a gory one, how did you make a gory story with chocolate rabbits?!
Love it, the best one I've read this week!
Hello Mya,
ReplyDeleteHow sad for the chocolate rabbits to lose one of their friends to the sun but to lose the entire community in a ceremonial parade honouring the loss is a tragedy. It seems they hadn't learned from the loss of their friend.
This is a well written and creative piece, Mya. I enjoyed reading your story. I hope you keep entering the 100WC. In your "reactions" choices above, I had to select "cool". :)
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
hi mya i have not writ to you yes and i just fell like doing that to day so your store is so good and see you tomrro lol :)
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