Thursday, 26 April 2012

Chloe's 100wc - week 28:

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  1. Hello Chloe,
    What a very colourful animal. I love the ears! A very clever name you thought of too. Maybe an animal like this might live in South Africa. I lived there for many years but never saw one.
    I think that the night zoo keeper might give you a job!
    Well done!

  2. Wow Chloe- I found your 100 word challange really fun and easy to read! Your animal sounds so amazing, Can I have one?!?

    It is also very descriptive, the only thing that I could pick out was at the very end you said what your animal was called, but you didn't put a capital letter!

    Other than that fantastic work!
    Keep it up! :-)

  3. Well done Chloe. You have a very creative imagination and I love how you have described the animal.

    Good job! Keep up the good work!

  4. Nice use of words. I was really interested in the passage.

  5. Emelia (homework)6 May 2012 at 17:52

    Hi Chloe, I liked your 100 wc, you used a good variety of words. I also liked the way you described your animal. maybe you could describe the way the animal acts or it's colour? I wish I could write as wonderful as you, Well done!



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