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Hello Chloe,What a very colourful animal. I love the ears! A very clever name you thought of too. Maybe an animal like this might live in South Africa. I lived there for many years but never saw one.I think that the night zoo keeper might give you a job!Well done! Liz
Wow Chloe- I found your 100 word challange really fun and easy to read! Your animal sounds so amazing, Can I have one?!?It is also very descriptive, the only thing that I could pick out was at the very end you said what your animal was called, but you didn't put a capital letter! Other than that fantastic work! Keep it up! :-)
Well done Chloe. You have a very creative imagination and I love how you have described the animal. Good job! Keep up the good work!
Nice use of words. I was really interested in the passage.
Hi Chloe, I liked your 100 wc, you used a good variety of words. I also liked the way you described your animal. maybe you could describe the way the animal acts or it's colour? I wish I could write as wonderful as you, Well done!Emelia:)
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