tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post4041529946129095317..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Chloe's 100wc - week 28:Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-17486116702933484992012-05-06T17:52:25.088+01:002012-05-06T17:52:25.088+01:00Hi Chloe, I liked your 100 wc, you used a good var...Hi Chloe, I liked your 100 wc, you used a good variety of words. I also liked the way you described your animal. maybe you could describe the way the animal acts or it's colour? I wish I could write as wonderful as you, Well done!<br /><br />Emelia:)Emelia (homework)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-4654982925891923162012-04-30T14:25:03.351+01:002012-04-30T14:25:03.351+01:00Nice use of words. I was really interested in the ...Nice use of words. I was really interested in the passage.Laurennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-55342237085590101502012-04-30T14:10:21.844+01:002012-04-30T14:10:21.844+01:00Well done Chloe. You have a very creative imaginat...Well done Chloe. You have a very creative imagination and I love how you have described the animal. <br /><br />Good job! Keep up the good work!Polly Shortnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-37412915599176041132012-04-28T19:09:22.317+01:002012-04-28T19:09:22.317+01:00Wow Chloe- I found your 100 word challange really ...Wow Chloe- I found your 100 word challange really fun and easy to read! Your animal sounds so amazing, Can I have one?!?<br /><br />It is also very descriptive, the only thing that I could pick out was at the very end you said what your animal was called, but you didn't put a capital letter! <br /><br />Other than that fantastic work! <br />Keep it up! :-)Molly Rnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-83487356861154617892012-04-28T09:25:48.405+01:002012-04-28T09:25:48.405+01:00Hello Chloe,
What a very colourful animal. I love...Hello Chloe,<br />What a very colourful animal. I love the ears! A very clever name you thought of too. Maybe an animal like this might live in South Africa. I lived there for many years but never saw one.<br />I think that the night zoo keeper might give you a job!<br />Well done! <br />LizAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com