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Grace- I love the way that you described the rabbits eyes, 'Her incredible blue eyes'. I like that bit, infact I love all of it! Well done :-) x
Thanks, I just didn't want the rabbits cuteness to slip away!
Wow Grace! How fantastic! Some great describing words like 'vividly' and 'incredible' are some!I have to say I don't know why you had a holigram of the mayor in there, it didn't seem to fit with the story.Other than that A-MAZ-ING!
I tried to add in the mayor as some extra mystery!
Goodness me, Grace - this is a spectacular 100wc! You have put a very mature slant on the prompt this week - I'm imagining a town which has gone through a disaster being taken over by utter chaos. The poor old mayor, too! Was this a hologram of something that had happened in the past? Did it trigger off all these events? Your 100 words has given me so many questions!Brilliant :-)Mr K.
yes I think it was a sort of holigraphic memory.Grace :)
Wow Grace this a fantastic entry for the 100WC. You have put a very clever slant on this weeks theme, and I have to agree with what your teacher wrote. It has raised so many questions. I really enjoyed your vivid description, it meant I could imagine the story. I look forward to reading more of your entries for the 100WC.
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