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Cricky Becky! What brilliant handwriting for your super sentences. You have made it a very scary set of sentences that you could turn into a very good story. Thank you for writing for the 5SC!
Yikes Becky! You certainly have made dragons sound scary especially when you said they drink blood! I think I'll be staying away from all dragons in future! Great 5sc challenge. Well done.Mrs P
Thanks Mrs Prior :)
I really liked how you described the dragon becky and how your writing and spelling has got better. Your doing very very well. A top star from me.
Well done Becky on you scary drogon sentences. Keep entering the 5SC.Mrs Lee Galley Hill
that was my dad michael i showd him what was the blog was like he is nice and i whent to his home on satday bye.
Your dad is right - super work Becky, keep it up! :-)Mr K
Well done becky you did really well your handwriting is getting better but it is neat and your spellings are improving From Elise
Hi Becky, we loved the way you described dragons. Maybe you could add some more commas and adjectives to make it longer. It is very good with your adverbs, such as colours. Charlotte, Emelia and Lozzer
thank u grils that is nice of u but i bet u did well two bye bye xxxxxx ;)
well done my becky ur very good at writing im so proud of you as always and i loved the story of the dragon it sounds very scary lndeed yikes
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