Monday, 7 May 2012

Liam's 100wc - week 29:

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  1. Liam - this is an excellent 100wc which I really enjoyed reading. You used the prompt in an imaginative way and also used heaps of descriptive language - well done!
    Mr K :-)

  2. I agree with Mr K! How did you use this prompt so imaginatively!? Also some great language like Mr K said! Well done!

    Just a few things though:
    You forgot a full-stop at the end of your story and a few spelling mistakes.

    Other than that a fabulous piece of writing! :)

  3. Hi Liam! I loved your story. It was very imaginative, and I could just picture the Professor's excitement as he plugged in the machine he had been working on for so long.
    Your writing is nice and neat too! Well done!

  4. Liam, I agree with all the other comments, this was a great 100wc. You used some super description but I also liked the way you used commas within your sentences - well done!
    Keep up the great work :-)
    Mrs McGuinnity (Team 100wc)


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