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Gosh, Grace! This is a fabulous piece of writing - you have remembered back to our WW2 topic to create a beautiful, poignant story that had me gripped from the very start.The only improvement I would suggest is to be careful you don't jump from the third person to the first person.Well done, Grace!Mr K :-)
Thank you for sharing your text with us, Grace. You use the cues to create a dramatic story.Keep up the great work!Kind regards,Diethild
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