Gosh, Grace! This is a fabulous piece of writing - you have remembered back to our WW2 topic to create a beautiful, poignant story that had me gripped from the very start.
The only improvement I would suggest is to be careful you don't jump from the third person to the first person.
Gosh, Grace! This is a fabulous piece of writing - you have remembered back to our WW2 topic to create a beautiful, poignant story that had me gripped from the very start.
ReplyDeleteThe only improvement I would suggest is to be careful you don't jump from the third person to the first person.
Well done, Grace!
Mr K :-)
Thank you for sharing your text with us, Grace. You use the cues to create a dramatic story.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!
Kind regards,
Diethild