Monday, 7 May 2012

Grace's 100wc - week 29:

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  1. Gosh, Grace! This is a fabulous piece of writing - you have remembered back to our WW2 topic to create a beautiful, poignant story that had me gripped from the very start.

    The only improvement I would suggest is to be careful you don't jump from the third person to the first person.

    Well done, Grace!
    Mr K :-)

  2. Thank you for sharing your text with us, Grace. You use the cues to create a dramatic story.
    Keep up the great work!
    Kind regards,


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