Saturday, 12 May 2012

Emelia's 100wc - week 30:

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  1. Hello Emelia,
    This is a great 100 Word Challenge!
    You have used wonderful adjectives such as, creepy, sprinted, giant, magical and greatest.
    You also used amazing adverbs such as, suddenly and curiously.
    Keep up the good work.
    Iqra :o)

  2. You have got me very intrigued Emelia! I really like mystery stories and am now burning with questions about this cliff, and why it is so important, and what is on the other side...... you have done a terrific job of creating an atmosphere and hooking in your readers from the very start. Well done!

  3. Great story Emelia.

  4. Great story Emelia

  5. Emeilia, your story was very adventurous. Just like you I love telling stories. Your class is soooooooooo smart. Why did you want to write about this topic for your 100 word challenge?

  6. Well done Emelia, I like the way you leave it on a cliff - hanger! Also I like your neat handwriting!

    Also, thankyou Jessica, Hamiz and Iqra for commenting on our blog!

    A great 100wc Emelia, well done!

  7. ash class klaudiusz18 May 2012 at 14:17

    Good work emelia


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