Tuesday, 1 May 2012

Sam B's 100wc - week 28:

My animal is called Giant Zebra Monkey. My animal always lives in packs of 100,000. If one of them is ill they will stay with the ill one if it dies they will bury it. They live in the Booboo forest and they only eat Booboo fruit. They look like a giant monkey with zebra stripes. There is a dark secret that at the end of every year for an hour they turn into Giant Monkey Zebra when They are in this form they are hunted. The people that do this have no soul I mean it no soul no soul.

16 comments:

  1. Mr Kenyon why is the writing black?

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    1. Should be the normal colour now! Think it just copied the colour when I copied the text from your email. :-)

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    1. No it isn't. Also Sam, can you please think about how you comment on the blog - I do not often see a 'please' or a 'thankyou'! Manners are important here too!

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  3. Lozzer's (homework)4 May 2012 at 07:55

    Hello Sam,
    I really liked your piece of writing but you could maybe use full stops because you have missed a couple in.You might want to look back at one of the sentences well done really good piece of writing. =]

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  4. It is very amazing 100 wc

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  5. Thank you I will look it over now

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  6. I thought your piece of writing was different from anyone elses. Your animal was fantasydosey! I especially liked the Booboo forest and Booboo fruit, the name is funny! I also like the part about souls because it shows how different we all are. From Lucy

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  7. Samantha and Ella4 May 2012 at 14:30

    Cool,just one thing what is Booboo?

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  8. This is a very good piece of work. I like the bit about the souls. ~_*

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  9. Runner Wolf (Ester)4 May 2012 at 14:42

    I love it. I am going to do three stars and a wish. Normally I have quite a lot of wishes but not this time! There's only one!
    * The amount of detail in just 100 words,
    * The imagination in your head,
    * Saying hunters have no soul,
    w But you have missed some commas.

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  10. dylanw (homework)7 May 2012 at 14:06

    Sam that was really good i am going to do three stars and a wishes.
    *There is so much detail i can a imagen it now
    *I really like the way you say they have "no souls"
    *It look's really cool in my imagination
    w you missed punctuation at the end and you could put a exaltation mark at the end.

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