Monday 7 May 2012

Lauren's 100wc - week 29:

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2 comments:

  1. Hi Lauren - you had some really great ideas for the 100wc this week and have produced a good piece of writing. My tip for you would be to read through it again - a few bits are quite tricky to understand - have you got all the punctuation in the right place?
    Mr K :-)

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  2. Thank you for putting this on mr K.

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