Hi Lauren - you had some really great ideas for the 100wc this week and have produced a good piece of writing. My tip for you would be to read through it again - a few bits are quite tricky to understand - have you got all the punctuation in the right place? Mr K :-)
Hi Lauren - you had some really great ideas for the 100wc this week and have produced a good piece of writing. My tip for you would be to read through it again - a few bits are quite tricky to understand - have you got all the punctuation in the right place?
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Thank you for putting this on mr K.
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