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Samantha - I love this 100wc! You have created a fantastic character in Pinky the Penguin - it's great that she's so determined to fly! Such a pity that after all that hard work she got homesick!One thing you could check is your capital letters and full stops - there are a few missing - can you spot where?Mr K :-)
A very good story line Samantha, I agree with Mr K on the name, how cool! Pinky the Penguin also sticks in your head, doesn't it! 2 things: As Mr K said, check your capital letters and full stops, there's an awfully long sentence in there! Also check for spelling mistakes; if you don't know how to spell a word you could ask Mr K or use a dictionary!A very good, positive story line! :)
This is a story which tells us to not believe what other people say and do what your heart tells you to do. Even if the knights said "pink penguins can't fly" Pincky still believed in herself and did what her heart told her to do and that's what I love about this story. This is the creativest story ever and it also has an important lesson that we have to learn.
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