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Chloe, that was a fasinating story. I especially loved the part where the man appeared suddently in front of you. I love making up pretend storys and reading them to myself when I want to hear an adventurous story. Just like what you did. Why did you want to write about this topic for your 100 word challenge? :D
Wow Chloe! I love your story it is amazing.
Oh dear, Chloe, you've written a piece that is full of suspense! Is this man going to benevolent or evil? I hope your character finds her way out of this mess. Good job, and keep writing. Mrs. Stading, Team 100 WC
Great job! I thought your story was brilliant.:D
Chloe I love your post it is very interesting keep it up.
What a super story Chloe. You really have made every word count.I really want to know what happens next - I hope you write the continuation.Mr SmithOld Heath SchoolColchester
Great story chole my name is Emtana.I really like your 100WC ecepessialy the part when you made the part,As I stepped in the old dusty libary.Great description and adjectives !
Your 100WC story 'now what do I need' is really good. You used lot's of good things in your story, you even have a cliffhanger. I think that the story will go on.
Good work chloe
Wow Chloe, a great 10wc, loved the cliff-hanger! How did that man appear? How was his diary on the floor? What else did the diary say? It builds up many questions in your head, which is very clever!Also, thanks to all those people from different schools who comment massivly on our blog, we are very greatful!
Hi Chloe, I loved your 100WC. You left it on a great cliff hanger that made me want to read on. You also made me think that it was a real book that had been published. Well done.
your 100wc is very good
Hi Chloe, your story is really good, it is also very creepy. I loved it aspesily when you said it was his diary I wondered what happened.A lovely 100 WC.Charlotte:)
Thank you for commenting on my post about jokes. Just try to think what the black and white creature rolling down the mountain, okay?
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