Thursday, 2 February 2012

Sam G's 100 word challenge - week#19

I was in my car driving across the snowy roads of Holland when suddenly I heard a rumble coming from deep, deep inside the earth's inner core and a long, sharp crack slowly broke the road in two, running away into the distance. I was petrified. I tried to twist and turn in and out of the cracks until I saw a dark red figure emerging from the cracks. It looked like a spirit of some sort, rising from beneath the ground. Not looking where I was going, I found myself falling into the hole deeper and deeper and deeper...

5 comments:

  1. Dear Sam, you got me following your story with so much keen interest until I ended without seeing the prompt for the week captured in your story. Good beginning, nice flow of thought. Keep blogging

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    1. Thanks for the reply, I will remember to put the title with the story next time!

      Thanks again,
      Sam G

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  2. This is a grand adventure story Sam. I'm not going to be too picky about the fact that you haven't used the exact prompt :)It is just great to see you work being shared on the 100WC!

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:33

      (Thought the same!)

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  3. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:12

    You got me gripped Sam, whats the dark red figure? One of the best I've seen on the blog!

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