“…so then I forgot it was leap year!” I finished as Mr Scoffing was pushed off the cliff, face red with anger and fear,
“Oh dear.” He mocked as he fell to his death. Then the forestpeople started dragging me away,
“You have helped us destroy the cities but you too must die! Bring out the tigers!” cried the forestmen. I was surprised how little it hurt. It felt like leaving an old friend though. My parents would have been sad how young I died but I felt fine. It’s funny how big a small thing can seem.
By Grace - Ash Class.
What a fabulous imagination you have Grace - this is a tremedous piece of writing - well done!
ReplyDeleteWow-Thats one great piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteReally good story! I liked it a lot. Very good piece of writting.
ReplyDeleteI liked it.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Grace & such an excellent reading of your brilliant writing!
ReplyDeleteCould you tell your teacher that I have used a post from Maple Class here http://www.theheadsoffice.co.uk/daily-dip-leap-year-special/
I would love to know if any teachers from Greenfields are on twitter. If there are, could you ask them to tweet me @theheadsoffice.
Thank you & well done again!
Me again! Can someone send me the link / code for the audio please
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