Wednesday 1 February 2012

Emily's short story - Upside Down...

Once there was a man who lived in an upside down house and he was called Steven. He had three grand-daughters and they were called Isabella, Chloe and Emma. He also had three grandsons called Sam, Jack and Owen. His wife, son and daughter all lived in the upside down house too.

So if you ever go near this house, your mind will go upside down and when you get to leave you will feel a bit perculiar. The last person who went to this house, no-one knows what happened to him...

If you ever see someone go in this house, beware! Whatever you do, don't go on their timemachine becuase you'll never got out! And if you hear them say, "Have a drink of orange," trust me, say NO!

13 comments:

  1. Callum the one who loves chicken2 February 2012 at 07:48

    NICE STORY

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  2. emily's story is really good I was reading it again and again and again. Well done emily give you're self a pat on the back

    from steven (I'm from america and we don't like many storys)

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:53

      Welcome to Ash Blog Steven Have you read my story?

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  3. nice story it is really cool

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  4. THANKS IM SO GLAD YOU ALL LIKE IT IT TOOK ME AGES TO WRITE

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:05

      It was woth it though...

      because that is super!

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  5. cool and strange i like it

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  6. Nice story i might make a song out of that if i do it will go like this thanks im glllllaaad. Issac aka silver fox3802. bye and write again

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    1. Hmmmm, our class blog is becoming more & more bizarre!

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    2. Hello jessie j i'm a huge fan

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    3. jessie j im such a big fan i am so happy when i listen to ur songs from elise in chestnut class

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  7. jessie j im such a big fan emily i love your story you go g freind from elise in chestnut class

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