Thursday, 2 February 2012

Mya's 100 word challenge! Week#19

The ground rumbled beneath me. Swarms of flies came out of the metre-wide gap. Parents were helping their children over the gap back to their homes. The ground slowly parted more and more. Next, tentacles slithered out like green tree roots. The gap had doubled in size!

Heads were becoming visible, ugly green heads. Soon after, mosquitoes started to come out. Everyone was running to their homes in panic: children were rushed into safe buildings away from the mosquitoes, flies and aliens. After four days the crack began to seal up; the flies, mosquitoes and aliens returning to the ground.

By Mya.
Ash Class, Year Five - Greenfields Primary School.
Posted by at 19:33
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9 comments:

  1. Mrs Robinson (100WC Team)2 February 2012 at 19:55

    First, I hope you liked the way the 100WC was introduced this week much better than just a typed message! I thought your idea of aliens was a great way of using the prompt. Your descriptions are fantastic and really bring your writing to life - well done.

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    1. Mya3 February 2012 at 10:00

      Thanks for reading my story I might be on the 100 word challenge next week.

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  2. Molly4 February 2012 at 09:32

    Wow Mya thanks a great story! I just love the description of the ugly green hands!

    Love Molly xx :)

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    1. Molly4 February 2012 at 13:54

      Sorry Mya, not the green ugly hands! The green ugly heads sorry! My mistake!

      From Molly xx :p

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    2. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:41

      I like that bit to :-p

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  3. Fay (Team 100WC)7 February 2012 at 07:27

    Hi Mya,
    What a great story for the 100 word challenge. You have a vivid imagination and write very well indeed. I particularly liked the fact that the children were taken good care of. Good work!

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  4. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 18:54

    Wow! great story Mya! I like it when you say: 'tenticales slither out like green routes.' A-MAZE-ING! :-)

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  5. Molly13 February 2012 at 11:33

    O-M-G I am just so ZONKED! That story is so, so, so, so, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

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