Friday, 24 February 2012

Molly's 100 word challenge - week 21

It was my friend's birthday today… 
Or so I thought....                                                                 
I rushed down the squeaky staircase and span into the kitchen. Then I thought," Can't wait to give Lucy her prezzie!" I had my yummy frosties for my breakfast and ran up the stairs back to my bedroom; I got dressed fast so I could get to Lucy’s house early.

I was ready. I ran out of the house and sped down the road. I was there. I knocked the door. It opened - it was Lucy. I shouted "HAPPY BIRTHDAY!"
“Its tomorrow...”
"Oh dear... I forgot it was leap year..."

By Molly - Ash Class.

26 comments:

  1. Great 100wc Molly! It's a difficult prompt this week, isn't it? :-)

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    1. Yes it was a pretty difficult prompt this week :-)

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  2. Great work, I thought that it was funny
    Ethan from Mooredge

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  3. Sophie W. (St. John Vianney24 February 2012 at 18:44

    Wow! That was interesting and the funniest one I've read so far. Nice job.

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    1. Thanks Sophie! It is a little bit funny!

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  4. Hello Molly,
    I agree with some of your previous comments, this is quite a difficult prompt - especially if you are young and can't really remember many leap years. However, you tackled it really well by writing about something that always happened on March 1st!
    Well done!
    Mrs Radd (Team100WC)

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    1. Hi Mrs Radd,

      Yes I realy do think it was a hard prompt this week. I am only 9 years old and I am glad you said I tackled it very well.

      Thanks for your comment...
      Molly

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  5. i really like this piece of writing mol :¬)

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  6. Thanks for all the comments!! :-)
    But I need more!

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  7. Hello Molly,
    My class and I were very impressed with your 100WC. You have used some advanced punctuation such as semi colons, ellipsis and accurate speech punctuation. We also like the fact that you have used some short sentences for effect. To improve further you might like to use a thesaurus to develop your vocabulary further.

    Well done Molly.

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    1. Thanks, and next time I will use a theasurus!

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  8. Thabks guys for all the comments!

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  9. Dear Molly, I enjoy reading your entry into 100wc this week. You have greatly improved your writing skills. Use of punctuation is just right. Nice piece. Well done!

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    1. Hi Olusola,

      Thanks, it's great that you think my writing skills have improved since the last time you commented!

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  10. Thanks for all the comments guy, but I need more!?!

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  11. Mrs Robinson (100WC Team)26 February 2012 at 20:41

    Hi Molly
    I loved your theme for this week's 100WC as it is very easy to either forget someone's birthday or get the wrong date. You have used some brilliant adjectives, I particulary liked the 'yummy' Frosties. Using speech is always a clever thing to do - well done.

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  12. Thanks for all the comments!

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  13. well tell everyone about the blog and ask them to comment!!

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  14. Hi Molly,

    I really like this piece of writing! I love the fact that you celebrated Lucy's birthday on the wrong day!

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