Friday, 24 February 2012

Mya's 100 word challenge - week 21

In the morning when I woke up I heard a scratching noise outside of my room. I walked outside to see a long trail of feathers down the corridor. I started to follow them. They led me outside and to the bottom of the garden but they kept going. I saw something out of the corner of my eye. It was rustling around in the corner. It had big eyes and a huge beak, his feathers were bright red. He glared at me. “Oh dear! I forgot it was leap year.” I said to myself quietly. I started to run…

By Mya - Ash Class.
Posted by at 11:09
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22 comments:

  1. Ash24 February 2012 at 11:10

    Yikes! What a great 100wc entry - well done Mya!

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    1. Gordon Ramsey (or Isaac)25 February 2012 at 10:58

      Give yourself a pat on the back!!

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  2. Molly Rowley24 February 2012 at 17:10

    Wow-Mya thats one spooky piece if writing!

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  3. Sophie W. (St. John Vianney24 February 2012 at 18:47

    That is an interesting piece you wrote. Is there like some kind of scary leap year monster I don't know about, or was it just a random bird?

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  4. Isaac25 February 2012 at 09:12

    I wonder what this feather-fearsome fellow is like? I hope he doesn't go and bite someones head off! Well he could be nice?

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  5. football17625 February 2012 at 10:00

    cool

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  6. Mrs Halford (Team100WC)25 February 2012 at 21:54

    Hi Mya, this is an exciting 100wc. I particularly liked the way you gave little clues rather than say right away what it was. I enjoyed this a lot and hope to see more of your writing.

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  7. Molly26 February 2012 at 10:52

    I really like this piece of writing Mya, I really engoy reading it. But at the same time i'm a bit spooked...

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  8. Olusola(Team 100wc)26 February 2012 at 14:31

    Hi Mya, nice piece for 100wc. You kept me in suspense. That't a good way of sustain your readers interest. I hope the mystery visitor is kind. I would love to know what the creature has in common for leap year. Good entry for 100wc. Well done!

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    1. Bankysbankole's desk2 March 2012 at 20:31

      Oops! I missed some spellings while trying to post the comment. Part of the comment should read, "That's a good way to sustain your readers' interest".

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  9. Anonymous27 February 2012 at 16:14

    wow that was a really good piece of writing

    from meg(in chestnut class)

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  10. Mrs Skinner28 February 2012 at 20:07

    This is a fun piece that has me asking what happens next!! Thank you for sharing your humour on the 100WC!

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  11. Molly29 February 2012 at 19:32

    MYA, YOU GOT INTO THE SHOWCASE!

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  12. Poplar29 February 2012 at 19:57

    Wow! This is a fantastic piece of writing Mya. What an amazing achievement being one of the showcase writers!
    Well Done
    Mr Holmes

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  13. rmannell12 March 2012 at 00:15

    Hello Mya,

    When I saw your name on the Showcase List I expected a great story. I wasn't disappointed. Your story is wonderful. I hope you keep entering the 100WC.

    @RossMannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher, NSW, Australia

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  14. isaac the parrot14 March 2012 at 16:17

    Hello Mya

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