Thursday, 2 February 2012

Alex's 100 word challenge - Week#19

The ground slowly parted: I saw hundreds of people jumping down what seemed like a never-ending black hole. I knew I had to jump because there was over a million angry bulls charging towards me! I jumped...

I woke up, I was floating in space. I could see the earth split into two. I wondered what to do...

By Alex.
Ash Class - Year Five - Greenfields Primary School.
Posted by at 20:02
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14 comments:

  1. Ash3 February 2012 at 21:54

    Woah! Weird stuff - well done Alex!

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  2. Molly5 February 2012 at 11:50

    Nice story Alex, have you read mine? :-)

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  3. Sammy A9 February 2012 at 15:40

    cool story alex we loved your story are you going to finishit .....

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 20:13

      You have only used 58 words, did you have time to finish it?

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    2. captain cod12 February 2012 at 10:33

      didnt have enough time to finish sorry

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  4. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 18:58

    Cool, like the cliff hanger!

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  5. Lozzer & Lottie+ Lucie11 March 2012 at 18:36

    ace story Alex, we want to find out more:-]

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  6. elise13 March 2012 at 19:10

    WOW alex im really intrested in that story my dad said he likes it he said its cool from elise in chestnut class

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  7. Isaac the Badger23 March 2012 at 08:14

    It ryhmes!

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  8. Anonymous15 May 2012 at 01:08

    It so cool.

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  9. Faaduma16 May 2012 at 02:37

    Wow it is sooo cool

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  10. JAyden16 May 2012 at 19:35

    I like it because it was exciting.

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