Thursday, 2 February 2012

Molly's 100 word challenge - Week#19

The year, 2012. Doomsday. The world was slowly coming to an end. You could hear the people of London screaming in terror. Hundreds of people were leaping into their cars and driving somewhere, some place; but there was nowhere to drive. The whole planet was ending.

Some people were praying to God, asking him to make it all stop. But there was no-one who could make it stop; not even the superheroes of the world. Many people were phoning their loved ones, sending their last words of love as the ground slowly parted...

By Molly.
Ash Class, Year Five - Greenfields Primary School.
Posted by at 19:40
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26 comments:

  1. Olusola (Team 100WC)2 February 2012 at 21:54

    Hi Molly, I love your piece. You captured the prompt for week 19 100wc so nicely.
    Great effort was made to describe the event. This arouses the curiosity of your readers. Kudos!

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    1. Molly3 February 2012 at 10:17

      Hi Olusola,

      Thanks,I found the prompt hard to put in a 100 word story, it was a pretty tricky prompt!I got this idea for the movie "2012 Doomsday" (You might have not heard of it),I thought it would suit this kind of story as the prompt was quite a eerie. I tried to make it a bit scary but not too much and I also tried to make the reader read on... I'm looking forward to you replying back to me and maybe my other friends!

      Bye, Molly :) xx

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  2. Florrie-Brookburn3 February 2012 at 12:03

    Thats an amazing pice of writing Molly !!!
    I also like the fact that they are leaping into the cars.Also the fact that you wrote sending their last messages shows how good you are at writing

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    1. Molly3 February 2012 at 17:52

      Hi Florrie,

      Thanks on commenting my 100 word challange! Yes, I also like my idea of the people leaping into their cars,It was pretty hard to think of at first but i soon got to the end and I didn't even need to edit words out! It all made into 100 words without no editing!!
      Looking forward to your reply!

      Byee! Molly xx :)

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  3. Molly4 February 2012 at 10:43

    Thanks for all the comments guys!! Keep then coming!! :)

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  4. football1769 February 2012 at 20:14

    well done that was AMAZING and mysterious

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:31

      who are you?!

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    2. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:48

      Just been on your blog, hello Liam!

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    3. Molly13 February 2012 at 11:43

      Liam, you spelt amazing wrong, you said "amaing"

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    4. football17624 February 2012 at 18:58

      i know

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  5. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:08

    Spooky, but A-MAZE-ING!

    LOVE IT!

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    1. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:17

      Is it my computer, or does it say 'love m' on my comment, because I didn't type that!

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    2. Ash10 February 2012 at 19:18

      I think it's the font making it look like a capital M !!!
      Instead of I T !

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    3. Isaac-AKA-SilverFox380210 February 2012 at 19:20

      Thank you for saying! thought it was just my computer! :-)

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  6. Anonymous11 February 2012 at 19:58

    Wow Molly brilliant story!

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    1. Molly12 February 2012 at 18:14

      Thanks Grace, can you tell Isaac to stop having a conversation on my post please... Thsi is ment to be comments, no a chat log!!

      (No evencie to Isaac... I don't know how to spell evenice you know lol xx)

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    2. Ash12 February 2012 at 18:19

      You may have invented a new word there, Molly! Do you mean 'no offence'?

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    3. Molly13 February 2012 at 11:23

      Oh sorry, Yay I've got a new word after me!!!! Yay xx :):-)

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    4. isaac22 February 2012 at 19:33

      LOL!! sorry molly, i just can't help LOLing! LOL! LOL! LOL!

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    5. Molly26 February 2012 at 18:33

      STOP LOLING!

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  7. Molly Rowley22 February 2012 at 16:32

    EVERYONE!

    Check out my story blog and you can post your enteries there!

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