Monday, 13 February 2012

Molly's 100 word challenge: Week 20

“It wasn’t my fault!” yelled Millie.
The 2500 dollar TV had smashed to the ground.
“That’s coming out of your allowance young lady!” screamed her mother.
Millie stormed off in a big fit, and slammed the door behind her. Millie lay on her dusty bed just thinking about what she had done, nothing, nothing at all had she done wrong. The door slowly opened, it was her horrid father.
“So tell me Millie what really happened?”
“It was all Charlie’s fault, not mine!” murmured Millie.
Everyone stayed silent for the rest of that day. It was really all Charlie’s fault.

By Molly - Ash Class.


  1. You put it on Mr Kenyon! Thanks xx :-)

  2. Mrs Robinson (100WC Team)14 February 2012 at 14:58

    Hi Molly

    What a fast pacing, action packed 100WC. Your use of speech really brings your writing to life. You show good understanding of punctuation too - well done.

    1. Hi Mrs Robiinson,

      It was quite hard tring to find a setting for my 100 word short story. But I knew that everyone would do the same thing!

      Got to go...

      Molly x :)

  3. Wow-Molly thats a great piece of wrting! Can't wait for more 100wc's from you!

  4. callum the one who loves chickens robinson!!!15 February 2012 at 20:15

    great writing molly !!!!!!!!!:-)

  5. well done molly really good from elise in chestnut class


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