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Great work, I think that this is very pesuasive writing. I think that it is very poor that the children in Africa casntot go to school. You could imrove by saying different words insted of school.Darcie Royle Class 5
This is great writing but I think it would be more intresting if you didnt keep writing school so much.Well done!
cursive is really hard I like normal printing better its a lot easier. Are crumpits good?
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Great work, I think that this is very pesuasive writing. I think that it is very poor that the children in Africa casntot go to school. You could imrove by saying different words insted of school.
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Class 5
This is great writing but I think it would be more intresting if you didnt keep writing school so much.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
cursive is really hard I like normal printing better its a lot easier. Are crumpits good?
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