Thursday, 28 June 2012

Chloe's 100wc - week 36

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  1. This writing is great because of the words that you used. I think you could make it better if you described some things a in more detail. Well done!

  2. This is a very creative peice of writing but it can be more intresting if you had better words in it.

  3. This writing is very creative because there is lots of intresting words in it but it can be more intresting if it had better words in it.

  4. Well Done Chloe
    This is a very interesting piece of writing

  5. Well done Chloe,

    I like the fact that you took on the persona of someone who has finished school and can reflect on why it was useful that you attended.

    I have never seen a 100 word challenge submitted this way before - what a good idea if you have written it already to save you having to retype. I will definitely mention this to my class!

    Well done and keep posting,
    Mrs Ratcliffe (Team 100WC)


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