Hi Callum. I like your news-report style 100 words. You're quite right - even footballers need to be able to read and write. Education can bring you so many things other than just skills for your future job! Well done.
Hello Callum, I really like the way you have answered the 100 WC prompt as a newspaper article. You make your reasons for why school is important sound very exciting and persuasive in your interview technique - keeping your reader interested. I hope you become a footballer when you are older - who did you want to win Euro 2012?
Hi Callum. I like your news-report style 100 words. You're quite right - even footballers need to be able to read and write. Education can bring you so many things other than just skills for your future job! Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Callum, I really like the way you have answered the 100 WC prompt as a newspaper article. You make your reasons for why school is important sound very exciting and persuasive in your interview technique - keeping your reader interested. I hope you become a footballer when you are older - who did you want to win Euro 2012?
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mrs Fine. I really enjoyed your comment. I wanted Spain to win the Euro 12 and they did!
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