Wow, I have read yours and it is amazing. I think that it is a good thing to write about. You have explained it very well why people should have an education. You have persuaded parents to take their children to school. You could make this better by explaining why you hate school or some of the countries that have to pay for their children to go to school.
Wow, I have read yours and it is amazing.
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a good thing to write about. You have explained it very well why people should have an education. You have persuaded parents to take their children to school.
You could make this better by explaining why you hate school or some of the countries that have to pay for their children to go to school.
Darcie Royle
Class 5