Friday 22 June 2012

Molly's 100 Word Challenge- Week 35

My feet crunched through the undergrowth of Vines Wood. I knew I was being followed, I kept on hearing footsteps padding behind me, every time I stopped, they stopped. Suddenly, there was a deafening squeal. The noise was terrifying but I soon realised it was just my mind making up things. I look around, and all that I can see is trees, they’re surrounding me. I shut my eyes, hoping that everything will go away. I was right, everything did go away. Now, I’m in complete darkness. No one to see, nothing to do. I’m slowly dying, I’m fading away…

By Molly

10 comments:

  1. Is it to be continued because if it is I am craving to see what happens next. This is a very, very, very adventurous story Molly. I'm very proud of you to write such an amazing story.

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    1. Thanks Jessica! I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading my 100WC this week! And yes, it is going to be continued, well soon at least. :-)

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  2. Hi Molly, I loved your story. It has a spooky feel but is also very emotional. After reading it I am left wondering about your character....who or what they are, and I felt a little sad for them.

    Really good writing. Keep it up.

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    1. Thanks Mrs Travers! I'm overjoyed that you like my 100WC this week! My character is a little 5 year old girl called Poppi.

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  3. I can't wait to see what's happens next. :D

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  4. Wow! Great use of describtive words. I realy liked how your character was being tricked by her imagination!

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    1. Thanks Zara! I thought it would make is more mysterious if I make it like her mind was tricking her!

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  5. Stunning. I love it and I also love the use of description in the first sentence. So mysterious. :¬)x2

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    1. Thanks Mya, I'm glad that you think its really mysterious! :-)

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