tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post946283935749821949..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Charlotte's 100wc - week 25.Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-32668390233196592342012-05-15T00:47:48.789+01:002012-05-15T00:47:48.789+01:00Wow! That story was a pretty good story. I loved t...Wow! That story was a pretty good story. I loved the part when you got out of prison. Why did you pick this topic for your 100 word challenge? -JessicaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-52204336763378268252012-05-03T17:36:00.786+01:002012-05-03T17:36:00.786+01:00AMAZING Charlote! ...AMAZING Charlote! I love the alternatives for 'said' you put in, but you could record your writing to make your work the best in the schooll. Hope this is great advice to you and keep on writing. From Oscar.Oscar (Homework)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-5163970782978440142012-04-03T10:31:38.147+01:002012-04-03T10:31:38.147+01:00Wow Charlotte, that was very intresting! Some grea...Wow Charlotte, that was very intresting! Some great alternatives to 'said' (e.g explained, asked, cried) well done!<br /><br />I would try to make the story line a bit less confusing though, if you know what I mean!<br /><br />Well done Charlotte!Isaacnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-69660967112338727962012-04-02T21:34:58.735+01:002012-04-02T21:34:58.735+01:00Hello Charlotte,
This is a super storyline with a...Hello Charlotte,<br /><br />This is a super storyline with a couple of very anxious moments. I really liked the twist created by the dream; I wasn't expecting that. I love the highs and lows you created with your choice of words and punctuation, helping you emphasise emotion.<br /><br />A truly enjoyable 100wc. I look forward to reading some more of your work.<br /><br />Mrs Shaw (Team100WC)Mrs Shaw (Team100WC)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-49228154913040917572012-03-30T18:23:06.955+01:002012-03-30T18:23:06.955+01:00Thank you. I did find it hard to use many other wo...Thank you. I did find it hard to use many other words. I hope to put on more soon.<br /> CharlotteCharlottenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-6180726706998251202012-03-28T08:10:52.945+01:002012-03-28T08:10:52.945+01:00Hello Charlotte,
You have made excellent use of t...Hello Charlotte,<br /><br />You have made excellent use of this week's prompt. You certainly had a frightening experience but at least you were freed in the end.<br /><br />I like your use of speech in your story. It's a way of sharing what a character is thinking. <br /><br />I hope you keep entering the 100WC.<br /><br />@RossMannell<br />Teacher, NSW, Australiarmannellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325881715643049499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-50164714550153439322012-03-23T12:59:46.308+00:002012-03-23T12:59:46.308+00:00love it bff :-]love it bff :-]ambernoreply@blogger.com