tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post7991542955439901083..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Aaron's 100wc - week 27Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-62115122843796474042012-06-15T11:59:13.132+01:002012-06-15T11:59:13.132+01:00what a great story aaron , wish i could read the r...what a great story aaron , wish i could read the rest x:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-69924361324039856242012-05-17T05:20:01.721+01:002012-05-17T05:20:01.721+01:00I love what you wrote on the blogI love what you wrote on the blogTalvirnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-67681270529636004232012-04-26T16:19:28.864+01:002012-04-26T16:19:28.864+01:00Well Done Aaron x I love the fact that you had no ...Well Done Aaron x I love the fact that you had no idea where you were going! It makes it a bit mysterious!?! Fantastic work! :)Molly Rnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-45443879860500079942012-04-22T18:44:38.496+01:002012-04-22T18:44:38.496+01:00hi Aaron well done& it is verry good :)xhi Aaron well done& it is verry good :)xBeckynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-86924429105898082182012-04-21T17:54:39.900+01:002012-04-21T17:54:39.900+01:00I agree with Mr K Aaron, your punctuation and desc...I agree with Mr K Aaron, your punctuation and descriptive language are great in this week's 100WC. This would make a great first chapter of a story, I would love to see the rest.Mrs Morris Team100WCnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-13078434377033429842012-04-21T11:54:50.123+01:002012-04-21T11:54:50.123+01:00Hi Aaron & well done for this week's 100wc...Hi Aaron & well done for this week's 100wc! You've tried really hard to include your punctuation and also some great descriptive language (massive, huge, suddenly, slowly). Remember not to confuse 'were' and 'where' (check your chart on your table!). <br /><br />I wonder if you all got away from the dragon and off the mountain safely? You left the story on a great cliff-hanger!<br />Mr K :-)Ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.com