tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post7967043911770812475..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Sam B's 100wc - week 24Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-23806608910631809552012-03-21T08:14:05.648+00:002012-03-21T08:14:05.648+00:00oh yes,
That was a great ide aswell.
Do you enjoy ...oh yes,<br />That was a great ide aswell.<br />Do you enjoy writing 100 word chllenges?<br />I do!chloenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-74549495729703351522012-03-20T17:29:47.773+00:002012-03-20T17:29:47.773+00:00I ment white clouds.I ment white clouds.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15500971800125415796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-10074270776742186072012-03-20T16:38:22.896+00:002012-03-20T16:38:22.896+00:00well done Sam. This is a great 100 word challenge....well done Sam. This is a great 100 word challenge. <br />I really liked how you put WHITE as the isle of white,that was a great idea. Have you read mine yet?chloenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-869713863179132152012-03-19T17:31:28.367+00:002012-03-19T17:31:28.367+00:00I really like the story you wrote because it is in...I really like the story you wrote because it is intresting and you used the prompt words well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-57623664343452933032012-03-18T09:54:07.469+00:002012-03-18T09:54:07.469+00:00Hi Sam - I agree with Mrs Halford - this is a real...Hi Sam - I agree with Mrs Halford - this is a really good 100wc. You've packed lots into your 100 words, creating a really interesting story. You must be a good runner! <br /><br />Be careful with words like of and off - they mean different things: eg, 'bag of sweets' and 'get off the floor!'<br /><br />Well done, Sam!<br />Mr K :-)Ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-24349699327175206402012-03-17T18:08:06.142+00:002012-03-17T18:08:06.142+00:00Hello Sam, thanks for taking part in the 100WC.
I ...Hello Sam, thanks for taking part in the 100WC.<br />I like to visit some from Ash class as I also teach an Ash class :D<br />Oh dear, fancy stepping on a spider. That would be an unpleasant start to the day. It was pretty amazing that you ran all the way around the world- I wondered if you had some sort of super powers to be able to do that. <br />Well done for including all the words (unfortunately, the Isle of Wight is spelt like this!) to make an imaginative and fast paced story. <br />To further improve your writing, try not to repeat words (you used 4 rans!) and add in some description of how the character was feeling.<br />Keep on blogging :DMrs Halford Team 100WChttp://www.classash.primaryblogger.co.uknoreply@blogger.com