tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post419506807850884262..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Amber's 100wc - week 32:Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-84866112218416437262012-06-03T09:49:31.160+01:002012-06-03T09:49:31.160+01:00well done amber you have used some very persuasive...well done amber you have used some very persuasive punctuation you could put things like " the 100wc is great for people because it helps with......" or " the 100wc helps children with their writing and punctuation because......" you have spelt a couple of words wrong but it is very persuasive and very deatailed <br />from elise in chestnutelise (chestnut)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-13274079414674379562012-05-25T19:14:25.162+01:002012-05-25T19:14:25.162+01:00Hi Amber, well done for writing such a persuasive ...Hi Amber, well done for writing such a persuasive letter! It was great that you included facts about the 100 word challenge such as it is worldwide, the number of children who take part and that you think it helps children with their writing and punctuation. From your writing I can sense just how much you like the prompts and challenge which is essential when writing a persuasive piece of writing. Maybe next time include some persuasive openers such as: 'Everyone knows, the 100 word challenge is the best blog around because...' or Surely you would agree, the 100 word challenge is a worldwide phenomena' and then add some facts to back it up. Keep up the great writing, I look forward to reading more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com