tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post3274938684393593284..comments2023-05-29T14:21:51.106+01:00Comments on Welcome to the Ash Class blog!: Ethan's 100wc - week 22Ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01748305476542026088noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-2781686369980488752012-03-07T13:42:38.106+00:002012-03-07T13:42:38.106+00:00hi it is me becky edwardshi it is me becky edwardsbeckynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-69710336458564283332012-03-06T20:34:24.928+00:002012-03-06T20:34:24.928+00:00I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge E...I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge Ethan, well done. Starting with dialogue is a clever way to start your story as it immediately hooks the reader in.<br /><br />Mrs Stones - Miriam Lord Primary, BradfordMrs Stonesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-82587121332392250562012-03-06T17:08:53.732+00:002012-03-06T17:08:53.732+00:00Cheery ending, Ethan!Cheery ending, Ethan!Isaac the Badgernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660300985154961922.post-70090041811892714842012-03-05T16:43:13.806+00:002012-03-05T16:43:13.806+00:00I love the way your story is packed full of excitm...I love the way your story is packed full of excitment and adventure Ethan - my heart was pounding by the end! Your short sentences really help to set the mood and keep the pace fast - but I like the way you've thrown in a few longer ones for variety too. Great job - I look forward to reading more of your 100WC stories!Caroline Hardman (Team 100WC)noreply@blogger.com